Rabu, 05 November 2014

My House

I live in beautiful house, my house is not really big but is not small. I have small yard in fron of my house, and some flower there.My house has some rooms, they are living room, three bad rooms, dining room, kitchen, Mushollah and bath room.

My living room is airy with four windows overlooking the yard, and two step from living room is my bad room, it has a half furnished with a new furniture and fitted carpets, beside my bad room is my brother's bad room, his room as large as my room.

My family and I usually breakfast together in dining room, in front of dining room is my kitchen, there are a some tools for cooking there. four step from kitchen, take you down in the bath room, and Mushollah beside of bath room.

2 komentar:

  1. but is not small = but also it is not small too
    fron = front
    some flower = some flower(s)
    bad rooms = bed rooms
    breakfast = have breakfast
    there are a some tools = there are some tools for cooking or cookwares
    four step = four step(s)
    sometimes put some articles such as a, an, the ...ect

    BalasHapus
  2. same with andri, you have many missing or mistake about your words. I only give you advice, you need more to be careful about your sentence. If you give full stop in your sentence and want to make new sentence, you need to give space after full stop and give Capital word in the first letter in your words.

    BalasHapus